Desk Crit

 

Desk Crit Given

 

Crit#1

Mary Lewis

Mary I really liked your choice of topic and the treatment of the project. The color scheme and the layout is good. However in the navigation once the learner completes one section it would be good to give him options to go the next section on the left hand navigation bar rather then sending him to the home. That is one less click.

Crit #2

Oluremilekun Ojo

I really enjoyed going through your project and reading all the stories. It was real fun. I also liked the design of your site. The choice of colors and the use of animated butterfly has added to the “engage” element on your site. My only advise is that you may provide a different way to navigate through the site. Instead of the user to go to home every time it may have been interesting to provide a icons to various sections which could be accessed globally.

Rest I think you have done a very good work with the content.

Crit#3

Eddie Hutchinson

Eddie it was a pleasure to watch your project. Its very crisp and speaks of the hardwork you have put on this. The idea of the museum map and the navigation is brilliant. You have done a good use of photographs and it really gives one a feel of inside of the museum.

My only advice is for you to use more images on each stopover in the museum. This may give the users a more variety and experience while on your site.

A very good work overall!!!

Crit#4

An, Hyo Seon

I liked going through your project. I liked the way you have divided the three sections on the program. It’s a logical way of going through the process of JEONBUK ENGLISH SPEECH CONTEST. I also likes the way you have used the video to make it so interesting.

A few things I noted which you may look into to make your program more effective – When your Wrap section loads, it interferes with the graphics of your design. You may make the text box a little smaller to counter that. Also there are no contact details for the user. They may be guided to contact someone in case they have any specific questions. It may be useful to give contact of the suthority who manages this contact or yourself if necessary.

Overall a very good work!

Desk Crit Received:

From Mary Lewis

I loved the scope and structure of your site. It is very easy to navigate and the color scheme is very pleasing. The video clips are a major plus! I can appreciate all the work it took to get the side-by-side videos coordinated. The topic is also a real need and the format you chose is a perfect platform for addressing your topic.

 

 

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